Please review my article
[edit]I am currently a student at Hanyang University. I would be grateful if you could kindly review my page and provide me with your valuable feedback. Thank you. Youn Jeayong (talk) 06:39, 24 October 2025 (UTC)
- @Youn Jeayong: It looks excellent. One or two more hotel listings would be excellent. If there are no other places to stay in the area, perhaps explain that further in prose and direct a visitor to a nearby place where they could stay.
- I think that this article is close to guide status. Good work! --Comment by Selfie City (talk) (contributions) 13:23, 31 October 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for your thoughtful feedback. As you suggested, I will look for more hotel information and add it to the article. I will continue to make every effort to provide useful and accurate information in the future. Thank you again for your valuable input! Youn Jeayong (talk) 15:22, 31 October 2025 (UTC)
Peer review feedback: Cheongsong County (Deadline 4)
[edit]Hello, this is LEE GEONYONG. I’m taking the Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis class this semester.
I’ve carefully read your article about Cheongsong County and I really enjoyed how you described both the natural beauty and local traditions of the area. The structure follows the Wikivoyage format very well, and the “Do” and “See” sections are already quite detailed.
Here are two points of feedback that might help you improve the article further:
1. Technical aspect:
The climate chart currently uses imperial units. Since Wikivoyage prefers the metric system for Korea, it would be better to switch to metric (°C and mm). Also, consider citing the official data source such as the Korea Meteorological Administration to make it more reliable.
2. Content aspect:
In the “Get in” section, the sentence mentioning that *“all rural and city buses are free for residents and visitors”* might need clarification. It would be good to verify whether this applies to all routes and passengers or only to certain lines or local residents. Adding an official reference from the Cheongsong County government website would make this statement more accurate and trustworthy.
Overall, this is an excellent draft — the article reads smoothly, and it provides both practical information and cultural context for travelers. With just a few technical and factual improvements, it will be ready for a “usable” or even “guide” status.
Thank you for your great work! 102536gy (talk) 04:27, 29 October 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you so much for your thoughtful and detailed feedback.
- Regarding the climate section, if you expand the chart, you can see that the temperature and precipitation figures are already provided in metric units (°C and mm).
- For the “Get in” section, I will double-check the fare information and either supplement or revise the content based on the latest official sources.
- Your careful review is much appreciated, and I’ll make sure to reflect your suggestions for greater accuracy and clarity. Youn Jeayong (talk) 06:44, 31 October 2025 (UTC)