Can you review my article
[edit]please review my article JJinYouuRiiiii (talk) 05:48, 24 October 2025 (UTC)
- @JJinYouuRiiiii: Good work. I'd suggest adding written descriptions about the hotels, but otherwise this article looks good. --Comment by Selfie City (talk) (contributions) 17:10, 26 October 2025 (UTC)
- @JJinYouuRiiiii: thank you for the improvements you have made to this article. The first paragraph of an article should explain why a reader would want to visit a place. What makes it interesting? Ground Zero (talk) 02:02, 7 November 2025 (UTC)
Feedback on your article - Minjoo Kim
[edit]Hi, I just reviewed your article on Gyeongsan for the extra credit activity. The layout and information about local attractions are clear and easy to follow. You could consider adding more details about transportation options or local cuisine to make it more useful for travelers. Also, adding a few more images could help readers visualize the city better. Great work overall — ~~~~ Kiim Miin Joo (talk) 02:21, 3 November 2025 (UTC)
Feedback on your article - Song Siwoo
[edit]I looked at the article you created, and it seems that the sections from “Get in” to “See” and “Do” are well organized. However, the “Buy” section still looks quite empty. If you add local markets or major supermarkets in that area, your article will become much more complete and informative. Sssongsiwoooo (talk) 04:29, 14 November 2025 (UTC)