Talk:Haman County Voyage Tips and guide

Hello, I have recently updated the Haman County page by adding more detailed information and restructuring the content. I would appreciate it if you could review the changes and provide any feedback or suggestions for further improvement. Thank you! Kiim Miin Joo (talk) 05:55, 24 October 2025 (UTC)Reply

@Kiim Miin Joo: Thank you for your work on this article. Please add coordinates for the existing listings, and add some listings in the section "Sleep". --Comment by Selfie City (talk) (contributions) 18:09, 26 October 2025 (UTC)Reply

There isn’t much information about the accommodation — it would be nice to add more details. Also, it would be great if you could include the location of the drink. But overall, you did a great job. Excellent work! JJinYouuRiiiii (talk) 06:34, 3 November 2025 (UTC)Reply

Some feedback from me:

(1) Make sure you're consistent in capitalizing Gaya Confederacy.

(2) In "Get in", make sure you tell prospective travelers how to get to Haman County, not how to go elsewhere.

(3) State how far away Gimhae International Airport is, how to get from there to Haman, and about how long it takes.

(4) Should bus information in "Get in" be repeated in "Get around"? Probably not. If it's for arriving in Haman, it belongs in "Get in"; if it's for getting from one place to another in Haman County, it belongs in "Get around".

(5) "See" seems good, except that I think the entry on the lotus theme park needs to be summarized, so that you state the same information as briefly and directly as possible.

(6) "Do" is really good; congratulations! I especially love the hiking directions. The only change I'd recommend is to bold the names of mountains you can climb.

(7) "Buy" is useful, but it would be best if you would give full Wikivoyage:Listings for each store and separately bold the market at the beginning of the section. The bike shop might be better placed in "Get around"; I'm not sure, but don't use first person language when talking about it. Also, be careful to use "there are" and not "there's" when talking about more than one subject ("There's also a couple of 하나로 marts"), though some native English-speakers do the same thing in informal contexts.

(8) Please use Wikivoyage:Listings templates in "Eat", which is definitely a useful section, thanks! Likewise in "Drink" and "Sleep".

Overall, this is a clear, well-written article; well-done! But if you make the kinds of changes I outline, it will be better, and might be good enough then to be promoted to guide level.

All the best,

Ikan Kekek (talk) 05:26, 7 November 2025 (UTC)Reply