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[edit]You might consider expanding the introduction a little more, perhaps adding what type of travelers would enjoy Nan’ao Island. Also understand section is informative, but you could break longer sentences into shorter ones for easier reading. You may also add a short note about the island’s climate or best travel seasons. Njkcs888 (talk) 09:17, 3 November 2025 (UTC)
Request for review: Nan'ao Island
[edit]Hello! Could someone please review my Wikivoyage article Nan'ao Island? This is for a class assignment. Any feedback is welcome. Thank you! Guwiqiie (talk) 14:36, 17 December 2025 (UTC)
- @Guwiqiie: Please add bullet points before all listings in sections See, Do, Buy, Eat, Drink, and Sleep. --Comment by Selfie City (talk) (contributions) 16:58, 17 December 2025 (UTC)
- @Selfie City: Thanks for the review! I added bullet points before all listings in See/Do/Buy/Eat/Drink/Sleep. Could you please take another look and let me know if anything else needs fixing? Guwiqiie (talk) 07:33, 20 December 2025 (UTC)
- @Guwiqiie: the only issue I still notice is that the section "Camping" should be moved to the bottom of "Sleep". It is currently in the section "Connect", which is incorrect. --Comment by Selfie City (talk) (contributions) 13:49, 20 December 2025 (UTC)
- Okay, thank you for your suggestion, I have made the changes.Guwiqiie (talk) 14:11, 20 December 2025 (UTC)
- @Guwiqiie: Looks good (although it should've still been a subheading, which I've gone ahead and corrected).
- What's in the article is well formatted and organized. A quick check with your professor @Hanyangprofessor2: on phone number format might be helpful, as I'm not entirely sure where the hyphens or spaces should land in Korean phone numbers. My concern for your class purposes is whether the article is too short. I don't know how many restaurants and things to do exist on this island; if there aren't other good options, for Wikivoyage purposes, what you have in the article now is sufficient. However, if you're expected to have more details for your class, a few more listings in "Eat" and "Sleep" could get the article to guide status. --Comment by Selfie City (talk) (contributions) 18:23, 20 December 2025 (UTC)
- @SelfieCity Thank you. @Guwiqiie Regarding phone numbers, please check my advice at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2/Student_assignments#Adding_a_listing (friendly ping to expert @Ground Zero) Hanyangprofessor2 (talk) 03:27, 21 December 2025 (UTC)
- Okay, thank you for your suggestion, I have made the changes.Guwiqiie (talk) 14:11, 20 December 2025 (UTC)
- @Guwiqiie: the only issue I still notice is that the section "Camping" should be moved to the bottom of "Sleep". It is currently in the section "Connect", which is incorrect. --Comment by Selfie City (talk) (contributions) 13:49, 20 December 2025 (UTC)
- @Selfie City: Thanks for the review! I added bullet points before all listings in See/Do/Buy/Eat/Drink/Sleep. Could you please take another look and let me know if anything else needs fixing? Guwiqiie (talk) 07:33, 20 December 2025 (UTC)