Review request for Gimpo article
[edit]Hello, I am a student working on this article for a class project ([https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gimpo]).
I have tried to complete all sections based on the Manual of Style.
Could you please review it for any major errors, omissions, or tone issues? Any feedback is welcome.
Thank you! --Jy20920 (talk) 06:39, 24 October 2025 (UTC)
- @Jy20920: Hi! the article looks excellent. I have a couple requests:
- The section "Get around" is empty. Please add some information about traveling within the city. Is it best to travel by car? What public transit options, if any, are avaliable, such as buses or trams?
- The market's open days are contradictory. The listing says it is open on days ending in 2 and 7 (2nd, 7th, 12th, 17th, 22nd, and 27th) before stating it is open on the 2nd and 7th.
- These are minor issues. Thanks for asking! --Comment by Selfie City (talk) (contributions) 13:09, 26 October 2025 (UTC)
- @Selfie City: Thank you so much for the excellent review and your quick feedback! I have addressed both of your requests:
- 1. I have completed the '''Get around''' section, adding detailed information about the Gimpo Goldline, local buses, and taxis/rideshares.
- 2. The contradiction in the market's open days has been resolved. The listing now clearly states that the market is held on the 2nd, 7th, 12th, 17th, 22nd, and 27th of every month (days ending in 2 or 7).
- I appreciate your help in improving the article!
- --Jy20920 (talk) 16:25, 2 November 2025 (UTC)
- Great, thanks! --Comment by Selfie City (talk) (contributions) 18:31, 2 November 2025 (UTC)
@Jy20920: thank you for the improvements you have made to this article. As your assignment page says: "Common error to avoid: you should add an address (street, building number, etc.) to your listing but do not repeat the city name. For example, if your listing is in Gimpo, the address does not need to contain the city name." That also means you do not include the province and country name. All of the listings in Gimpo are going to be in Gimpo-si, Gyeonggi-do, so we do not repeat that information. Please make these corrections. Thank you. Ground Zero (talk) 01:59, 7 November 2025 (UTC)
- I checked and found that there was a problem with the 'Eat' section, so I corrected the address. I didn't know there was a problem with the address, not the information I added. Thank you for letting me know! Jy20920 (talk) 04:54, 7 November 2025 (UTC)