Please Review My Article
[edit]Please review my article and let me know the modifications. 지은 (talk) 06:32, 24 October 2025 (UTC)
Peer Feedback
[edit]Hello, I enjoyed the document you wrote. I was impressed because it was well organized overall. However, the Eat, Drink, and Sleep sections felt simpler than other parts. If you supplement this part a little more, I think the document will be more meaningful. I look forward to your continued contribution. Joow0n1 (talk) 04:58, 27 October 2025 (UTC)
- Yes, I'll try to fix it together. 유빈20 (talk) 06:09, 28 October 2025 (UTC)