In the city of Kagoshima?
[edit]If this is a neighborhood in Kagoshima, this article must be merged and redirected, because no-one agreed to divide the city of Kagoshima into separate district articles on this site. Ikan Kekek (talk) 07:07, 16 November 2025 (UTC)
- User:Dbludblo, this message is especially for you. Ikan Kekek (talk) 07:08, 16 November 2025 (UTC)
- It's not a city that belongs to Kagoshima City, it belongs to another city in the administrative district, should I merge this? Dbludblo (talk) 07:12, 16 November 2025 (UTC)
- No, in that case, the lede of this article has to be edited so that it tells the truth. Ikan Kekek (talk) 07:14, 16 November 2025 (UTC)
- I quote the current phrasing of the lede: "Hioki is in the city Kagoshima." Ikan Kekek (talk) 07:15, 16 November 2025 (UTC)
- If you're talking about the understanding part, I've attached the link to Kagoshima (prefecture) and the WikiVoyage link. Dbludblo (talk) 07:16, 16 November 2025 (UTC)
- The lede is the first sentence of the article. Ikan Kekek (talk) 07:56, 16 November 2025 (UTC)
- Which you edited suitably. So another quick pointer: Wikivoyage:Capitalization of section headers is newspaper-style, so "By plane", not "By Plane". Ikan Kekek (talk) 07:58, 16 November 2025 (UTC)
- Isn't that the understanding part? Dbludblo (talk) 08:11, 16 November 2025 (UTC)
- The lede is before the "Understand" section. The real purpose of it is to really briefly tell prospective visitors why they would want to visit. Have a look at any article in Category:Star articles to see how it's been done there. Ikan Kekek (talk) 09:15, 16 November 2025 (UTC)
- The lede is the first sentence of the article. Ikan Kekek (talk) 07:56, 16 November 2025 (UTC)
- If you're talking about the understanding part, I've attached the link to Kagoshima (prefecture) and the WikiVoyage link. Dbludblo (talk) 07:16, 16 November 2025 (UTC)
- I quote the current phrasing of the lede: "Hioki is in the city Kagoshima." Ikan Kekek (talk) 07:15, 16 November 2025 (UTC)
- No, in that case, the lede of this article has to be edited so that it tells the truth. Ikan Kekek (talk) 07:14, 16 November 2025 (UTC)
- It's not a city that belongs to Kagoshima City, it belongs to another city in the administrative district, should I merge this? Dbludblo (talk) 07:12, 16 November 2025 (UTC)