Talk:Nonsan Voyage Tips and guide

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Sincerely, I request you to review my article..Thank you so much. JHyunlee (talk) 05:44, 18 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Overall, it is very well categorized. In particular, see is characterized by being subdivided in various ways. There are many photos included, so it feels rich. I think it would be a better article if you changed the banner to a photo that shows Nonsan well. Yujin0203 (talk) 06:02, 18 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Your article is very nice and perfect. I want to make a great article like you. Hee Jung, Yoon (talk) 06:24, 18 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

@JHyunlee: thank you for the improvements you have made to this article. The first paragraph of an article should explain why a reader would want to visit a place. What makes it interesting? Ground Zero (talk) 20:10, 19 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Sorry. I had no time to fix my first paragraph and 'Understand' section because of my mid-term exam at school. I added it yesterday, so i request that you review my article about 'Nonsan'. JHyunlee (talk) 12:16, 22 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

I had a look through this article just now. It's great that there's so much information in this article, and I'd actually love for more of the listings to have even more informative "content" sections that tell visitors things they would want to know. However, the number of listings in general feels really overwhelming to me. Would it be reasonable to remove some of them, or otherwise to divide some of the longest sections and subsections? For example, it is usual to divide restaurants and hotels by price category (Budget, Mid-range, and Splurge). I doubt it will be reasonable to divide up cafes that way, but do we need 31 cafes? With so many listings under "Cultural heritage sites", could they be subdivided by location (neighborhood or something)? What about "Other sights"? And at least each section or subsection needs to be alphabetized. Ikan Kekek (talk) 09:21, 28 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for your detailed feedback! But i am going to busy until next Thursday because of my several team projects.. So, can I revise it further later on? JHyunlee (talk) 10:45, 4 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

Of course! The site will be here whenever you have the time. :-) Ikan Kekek (talk) 17:08, 4 November 2024 (UTC)Reply