Please review my article.
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- The banner picture is not a foreground or background of the area, but a food picture, so it would be good to modify it. Kang Taeho (talk) 05:57, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- There isn't enough information about restaurants at the moment, so I'd like to add more to the list! Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 05:59, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- To comment on your article, it seems to be well classified overall. In particular, there are various items in Buy and Sleep. However, I think it will be a better article if you add the items in See. JHyunlee (talk) 06:09, 18 October 2024 (UTC)JHyunlee (talk) 06:29, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- Your article is very nice !!! But I think it's more better if you add some food part and more pictures!! Hee Jung, Yoon (talk) 06:26, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- Your article is really interesting! There is a lot of new information about the region. But it would be nice to add an eat list Ydaeun0306 (talk) 06:39, 25 October 2024 (UTC)
- As have told you elsewhere, in an article about a city, we do not put the city and province name in the listings. Because the article is about Hongseong, it is wrong to put "Hongseong-gun, Chungcheongnam-do" in addresses. Please remove this. And also in Yecheon, and in Hyehwa, where all of thd listings are in Jongno-gu, Seoul. Ground Zero (talk) 17:36, 25 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Yujin0203 Please make sure to review the feedback above. Hanyangprofessor2 (talk) 01:12, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
- I also notice there's no content in "Get around." Tell people how they can travel around this place. Ikan Kekek (talk) 01:45, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
- The article helps a lot! But it would be better if we could add a list related to 'Eat' and 'Drink' and add a photo related to it. :) Parksungeun (talk) 04:50, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
- Your article is so good! But I hope you add some temples, schools, and cafes! I think hongseong will have a lot of cafe because nature is so good.Hee Jung, Yoon (talk) 03:16, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
The first section of the article (the "lead section") should explain why the reader would want to visit the place. See Wikivoyage:Article skeleton templates/Sections.
And you must make the other changes that I and other editors have suggested. Ground Zero (talk) 09:53, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
The Get in could be improved by telling what major transport hubs could be convenient for getting to Hongseong, i.e. from where are there train or long-distance bus services?
The lists in Buy, Restaurants and Sleep are quite long (23, 10 and 20, when we try to keep list at 7±2). Would there be some convenient way to break them down into shorter lists (such as by area, type or price)? I see 12 listings for Hanaro Marts, with no description (e.g. "Geumma Agricultural Cooperative" may tell a lot, but not to me; perhaps there should be a general descriptions in the country or region article). At least it might make sense to put them (and other similar "marts") in a common subsection. I don't know the country, so cannot tell what's the best solution.
–LPfi (talk) 12:04, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for your detailed feedback! I'll change it. Yujin0203 (talk) 10:14, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. –LPfi (talk) 20:24, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
Phone numbers
[edit]I note that some numbers are given as +82 041-xxx-xxxx or +82 0507-xxxx-xxxx, others as +82 41-xxx-xxxx. In many countries you dial a leading zero for domestic long-distance calls, while the zero should be left out when dialling from abroad. Is this the case also here? In that case the zeroes after the country prefix (+82) should be left out and the latter form used. –LPfi (talk) 10:51, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
- @LPfi Fixed now? (I told the student to ping you but...) Hanyangprofessor2 (talk) 04:42, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- I saw that somebody did it quite soon after my comment, at least for many of the numbers. No, I don't think they pinged me about it. I think I thanked them, but might not have got to it. –LPfi (talk) 10:51, 21 December 2024 (UTC)